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August 2, 2010
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Canon
Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
1/200 second
F/1.8
50 mm
1600
Aug 1, 2010, 10:35:38 PM
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:iconshaunjoyce:
Band: Combichrist
Venue: Eddies Rock Bar, Birmingham
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Let me start off with the composition. What's important to notice here is the distinctive use of the golden section. This is something not every artist or image can carry off but I believe you've got enough elements to cover this.

Clearly defined use of the rule of thirds and leading lines which bring you directly to the focal point, which is pretty much pin sharp.

The tonal rage is great, this image really works in Black and White. There is enough shadowing along these delicate tones to give clarity and defination.

I would however suggest you watch your focus, maybe the "gun-hand" could have been a bit more in focus but as a gig photographer I can empathise with the strains of catching the perfect shot.

Overall the visual impact of the image is aesthetically pleasing and I must congratulate you on really capturing the moment.
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:iconjewrdan420:
LOVE THIS!
Check it, and join! :iconcombicritters:
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:iconredyojik:
Very good portrait!
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*ShaunJoyce Sep 6, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks
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:iconredyojik:
You'r welcome
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`Lady-Twiglet Aug 3, 2010  Professional Photographer
this is an awesome shot, fantastic timing and the focal point is spot on, well done!
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*ShaunJoyce Aug 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks :)
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`Princess-Amy Aug 2, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm just loving that expression, You caught him just at the right second there.
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*ShaunJoyce Aug 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Yeah I'm really pleased with this one.
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`Princess-Amy Aug 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
good :)
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:iconkerrangist:
well captured considering the lighting conditions were so hit and miss ,it was great to shoot with you again ^_^.
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